Skip to main content

Changed Lives Part Four. Free Christian Story. Jesus Saves

 



Changed Lives


Part Four



Eli had settled on a hire tractor for the moment. That Monday, he put it to good use leveling and grading the sizeable piece of ground he'd marked off for his barn. As he worked he mulled over the weekend. First, his visit with the Merton's and Gretchen, the happy news, and the interesting conversation they'd had over coffee. That conversation had led him to do something he'd never thought he'd do. He had attended not only one, but two services at the Chapel on Sunday. He'd come away convinced that something was seriously wrong with his own church. At the Chapel, he'd met up with the Merton's and with Gretchen again. They, along with the pastor and other folk, had welcomed him warmly. After the service, Eli had spoken for some time with the Pastor, and he'd come away with a great deal to think about.


***


Eli finished grading, then headed for his truck. He needed to fetch his first load of timber from the hardware store. Putting up a barn was a huge project  and he was going to need some help too.

When he walked down the aisle that housed the brads he needed, his eyes widened. Gretchen was selecting a pack of felt nails from the shelf. 

She looked up and laughed at the surprised expression on his face. "The shade cloth on my green house is starting to lift. I want to catch it before it rips off. Are you buying nails too?"

"Yes, for my nail gun. I need to make a start on the barn." He wondered whether Gretchen was keen on Diy. 

"A nail gun? That must make things easier." Gretchen grinned.  "I've never used one. It's just me and my hammer."

"I can show you how to use one if you like." He grinned back at Gretchen. He realized that he was only half joking. If Gretchen took up his offer, he'd gladly oblige. He'd often thought what an attractive woman Gretchen was with her clear blue eyes and blonde hair. Now as he looked into those same eyes, he saw a joy and a peace he'd not seen before. And it drew him.

"I might just take you up on that." Said Gretchen lightly. "Well, I'd best leave you to your shopping. See you Sunday?"

Eli nodded slowly. "Yes, see you Sunday. I want to hear more from the pastor."

Gretchen nodded, pleased. "He does explain things well, doesn't he? See you on Sunday then, Eli." Gretchen made her way to the checkout with her purchase. In her heart, she rejoiced that Eli was going to be at church again, but she cautioned herself against being too friendly. The last thing she needed was a repeat of what had happened with Colin. She sighed as she got into her car. It was a pity. Eli was nice, and she wouldn't have minded seeing his farm and having a go with the nail gun.


****


Eli stood staring at the rack in front of him for some moments after Gretchen left. He couldn't help smiling. Fancy Gretchen being into Diy. He guessed that it wasn't actually so surprising: she lived alone, and their must be plenty of maintenance to be done around her place. Not to mention the fact that she was no longer living under the strict surveillance of Pastor Stefan and the elders. He grimaced. No doubt he would soon come under flack himself for his own recent and planned future desertion.  He found the brads he was looking for, then went to pay for them as well as his wood. When he headed back to his truck, he saw Gretchen driving away.  As much as he wanted to see her again on Sunday, he knew that there were more serious reasons compelling him to go again.


***


Copyright: Alison Lawrence. 2023. All rights reserved.


Changed Lives is a work of fiction and no resemblance to any persons or places is intended.


Drawing by the author.


Changed Lives, Part Three:


Link


More Reading



Jesus Freak Janice: A Children's Story. (8-12 yrs)


Janice goes to a tough school where God isn't welcome. However, Janice has a very special friend who helps her everyday.

E book($2.99)

Paperback($7.99)


Link


Hope you have a blessed day. Please share the story and the blog with friends and family.

Love and blessings,

Til next time,

Alison

💜💜💜



Comments

Popular posts from this blog

The Conversation. A Free Short Story

  The Conversation  Gavin was so absorbed in his book, that he barely noticed that the train had stopped at a station. "Mind if I sit here?" He looked up. A young woman with friendly freckles across her nose and wide brown eyes stood in the aisle. He nodded, then smiled faintly and she quickly stowed her large backpack. "I'm Sybil." The young woman offered. "Thanks." "No problem. Travelling to Barton?"  "Nope. It's Dunmore I'm headed for. You?" "Same." Gavin was cautious. He wasn't sure he felt like a chatty companion. He'd been looking forward to finishing his book. It had hooked him from the first chapter. But thankfully, Sybil didn't bubble on. She just smiled before taking her own book out.  Gavin went back to his reading, not without noticing that it was a Bible that Sybil had opened. Unusual.   Sybil glanced towards him. She liked to study people, and would often strike up a conversation in the ho...

Rapture Collection.

  Rapture Collection Dear Readers, Given the urgency of the times, I felt it on my heart to write this post. I have written several stories with a Rapture message. Below are links to three of them. You will find other references to the Rapture, or the great snatching away of the Bride, throughout the blog. I will also include a link to my testimony. Today is the day to repent and to call on Jesus to save you. With much love and prayers, Alison Waiting A Reason To Clean The Last Reminder My Testimony  (Scroll to view. I titled it, He Stooped Down.)  💕🙏🩷

Not Much Time. Free Short Story.

  Years have gone by, yet the phone call still plays clear as a bell in my mind. "He needs to come home. Please tell him. There isn't much time." The thin, frail voice of the caller lent weight to the urgency of her call. No, there couldn't have been much time. "Daddy, a lady called. An old lady. She said there isn't much time." I tiptoed up to his armchair. I spoke softly, hesitantly. I was only a child, and I knew nothing of his past. "She says, she says, you must go home." "No!" The armchair shook with the force of his rage. "No! And don't talk to that woman again."  No further calls came from the frail-voiced lady. At least, not that I know of. *** Daddy was nearing the end. The end of a long, long battle. I was in my forties, married, and with children of my own. "Who was she Daddy?" I asked gently, hoping with God's help to bring him to a place of peace and forgiveness. But his face tightened and he t...